Saturday, November 21, 2009

The Poet

This has been a busy week ... my inbox has been filled with emails from so many wonderful potentials! Here's one that stands out from the rest. "T" 51 has a poem as the intro to his profile ... who doesn't love a sensitive poet?

 "The Swan I watch you in the distance but you don't see me then our eyes meet you smile and look away Your face lovlier then a white orchid blooming body curvy and voluptuous [you got the wrong girl there chief!) under your silky bridal [bridal???? oh no ...] dress You disappear in the sunlight of the shimmering water I cry out your name but you don't here [here???] me dive [why do they all like swimmers????] in the water and swim after you beholding me you spread your wings wrap your neck around mine and pull me into the milky body of your plumage Happily we hold hands and swim away [or more likely, drown]."

What ever happened to real men ... you know, the kind whose poems start with "There once was a girl from Nantucket ..."?????

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